Wednesday, August 3, 2011

Do you think this is a good start for a story?

Yes this is a good start to a story and its interesting and the key to any story is for it to be interesting.Keep up the good work and keep it interesting that's how people will read it and like it.I like it.mabe you can become a writer in time if you arent already a writer now.I like the way you put in the details of your neighbours both sides and the moterbike parked up against the wall,all these little details of the story make it far more interesting and it makes you want to read more so continue to finish the story and the story is brill so far.

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